Deep in the big blue ocean, there lived Meena, a
Little Mermaid. Meena loved listening to
her Grandma's stories of the world
beyond the ocean, where humans live. She
spent hours in the public library, reading about humans, and looked forward to
turning eighteen, when she'd be allowed to swim up to the surface of the ocean
and see a little of that world herself.
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This story is written as part of the Twist-A-Tale contest on Tell-A-Tale – reading and writing stories for this age.
On her eighteenth birthday, even as she was dashing around in excitement, raring to set off on the
adventure she'd been waiting for all her life, Grandma called Meena to her, and started affixing oyster
shells to her tail, in honour of her becoming an adult.
"Ouch! It hurts!" said Meena.
"One has to suffer to be beautiful,"
said Grandma.
"Beautiful? And who said oysters on tails are beautiful? And I want to be happy, not beautiful!" said Meena with a laugh, and wriggled away from her surprised Grandma's
grasp. She swam to the
surface, sat on the rocks and spent all day looking at the vast, blue sky, the fluffy white clouds and the ships
sailing by. She was particularly fascinated by the seagulls, and wished she had
wings like them, so that she could fly in the sky and see what her beloved
ocean looked like from above.
Towards evening, the clouds
darkened, and a storm gathered. A passing ship lurched in the gale, and a man fell off it. Nobody on the ship seemed
to notice. Meena swam
up to him. He was unconscious. She held his head above water, knowing that humans cannot breathe underwater, and steered him
to the nearest island. She waited to
make sure he was fine, and tried hard not to
stare at his legs. She noticed that
there was something in his jacket pocket - it was a book.
"Hmmm," she thought, picking it
up. "He's a reader. Must be an interesting man. I'd like to be friends with him!"
But there was a merpeople rule – humans and
merpeople weren't allowed to be friends! Meena sighed. Just as the man regained consciousness, Meena
plopped into the ocean.
After she got back, she realized that she'd
brought the book with her. She opened it, and found the man's name - Manav, and his address in it. Her eyes gleamed. She'd go to return the book - what an
excellent pretext to explore the human world! To hell with rules!
But how would she walk on land? She went to The Witch who lived in the dark depths of the ocean. She knew several spells.
"I'll make you legs to walk with," said
The Witch, "only if you lend me your beautiful voice for as long as you're
away."
It didn't seem like Meena
had much of a choice. She parted with
her voice, lost her tail, and got two legs in
return.
She surfaced at the beach nearest to the address
in Manav's book.
It wasn't easy.
Walking hurt. She felt
heavy. Besides, she couldn't talk, and
she noted with disappointment that humans weren't so kind to fellow-humans who
were a little different. But Meena was a
determined, resilient young merlady.
With the help of pencil and paper, and with a little sign language, she asked for directions. It took her
a few days, but she finally found Manav. She gave him his book, and explained how she had come by it. He
was quite sceptical at first, naturally, and then
intrigued. And thankful
to her, of course for having saved his life.
They hung out for a bit, and really enjoyed each
others' company.
But Meena missed home. Her feet hurt. And she'd had enough of stealing food
(tasteless at that – hardly anybody used sea salt) to fill her stomach. And she was tired of spending the nights in
chlorinated swimming pools. Besides, the course in reef biology she'd enrolled in was due to start in a week.
She left, with an understanding with Manav that they'd meet frequently.
She retrieved her lovely tail and her voice from The Witch.
So, every weekend, when she can get away from her
coursework, she and Manav meet at the
beach and talk, she in the water, and he on a rock. Though she's not exactly head over fishtail
in love with him, she likes him. Manav
is learning scuba-diving.
And we leave them here. Whether Meena marries Manav or not, she's the
kind who'll ensure that she'll live happily ever after.
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This story is written as part of the Twist-A-Tale contest on Tell-A-Tale – reading and writing stories for this age.
6 comments:
What a nice twist! Loved it.
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Loved it!! Beautifully written with an earthly twist. I love all the attention to details.
Beautiful imagination Shruthi! Loved it.
What a lovely story Shruthi! Loved the twist to the tale! You go girl!
Wow, wow and wow. Loved your story.
After I had a daughter and started telling her stories, I realized how sexist so many of the fairy tales are. I want none of the fairy tale heroines to be a role model for my little one. So far, she does not know a single fairy tale. Now this one, I can make her read.
PS: Sent an email to you. Need your opinion about something.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful post, It is awesome.
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